Update pages/tool_assembly/tsd_assembly.md

Co-authored-by: Federico Bianchini <[email protected]>

pages/tool_assembly/tsd_assembly.md

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ If you are affiliated to a Norwegian institution which has already stipulated a
 
 The Norwegian Tool Assembly for sensitive data offers support with [Data Management Planning](planning) through a [national instance of the Data Stewardship Wizard (DSW)](https://norway.dsw.elixir-europe.org/wizard/) following the guidelines of the major national and European funding bodies. Dedicated references in DSW guide you (user) through national infrastructure, resources, and laws and regulations, and also include the {% tool "tryggve-elsi-checklist" %} for Ethical, Legal and Social Implications. In the future, you will be able to submit storage request forms for [Data Storage](storage) in TSD with defined access permissions through the DSW.
 
-In addition to storage services offered by TSD, [processing](processing) and [analysis](analysing) of data is performed in a safe environment within TSD. 
+In addition to its storage services, TSD offers safe environments for data [processing](processing) and [analysis](analysing). 
 As a national user, you can access TSD by identifying yourself using the Norwegian [ID-porten](https://eid.difi.no/en/id-porten) system. International users can get access by contacting [[email protected]](mailto:[email protected]).
 
 Within TSD, you can access  a Windows or Linux virtual machine (VM) and, upon request, [high performance computing (HPC) resources](https://www.uio.no/english/services/it/research/sensitive-data/help/hpc/index.html) and [backup storage](https://www.uio.no/english/services/it/research/sensitive-data/help/Backup-file-recovery.html). You login using two-factor authentication with [Google Authenticator](https://support.google.com/accounts/answer/1066447?co=GENIE.Platform%3DAndroid&hl=en) and a dedicated username and password. The [login in procedure](https://www.uio.no/english/services/it/research/sensitive-data/help/login.html) is different for Windows and Linux VMs on TSD.